The new chapter one is up! Please let me know if it works as a new opening. Less weird words for people who found it hard to get the first time.
I'm so close to the story that I'm not sure I covered all the information necessary for a first chapter so I would appreciate your help. Thank you in advance!
Saturday, November 21, 2009
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You need a much more obvious link to beginning of story, Newcomers won't realise they have to hunt for earliest date in sidebar
ReplyDeleteThanks Valdary. New button set up right at the top!
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