Saturday, November 21, 2009

Author's Note - New Chapter One Posted

The new chapter one is up! Please let me know if it works as a new opening. Less weird words for people who found it hard to get the first time.

I'm so close to the story that I'm not sure I covered all the information necessary for a first chapter so I would appreciate your help. Thank you in advance!


  1. You need a much more obvious link to beginning of story, Newcomers won't realise they have to hunt for earliest date in sidebar

  2. Thanks Valdary. New button set up right at the top!